I'm not sure why but I quite liked that video. To my mind you have a good screen presence and a good voice ~ but you lost me a couple of times with region specific colloquialisms and 'bouncing around' on the subjects you were trying to cover

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A couple of pointers though, if I may (a daft thing to say as I'll have posted before you can respond

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- Have at least a basic framework of a script as this will help you keep both on tack and on track. Reiterating is a good thing, but only if you're summarising something'.
- Work at talking toward the camera. It's easy for a viewer to lose track of what's being said and being able to see the whole of a speakers face can help convey a message more effectively as well as more efficiently.
- Please learn and use a safe stance when sawing wood. Had you slipped and over drawn the saw its trajectory would have seen it getting very close to your right thigh.
- Sticks, pointy or not, aren't covered by the same bit of legislation which allows the carrying of sub 3" non locking folders ~ and anything can be classed as an offensive weapon if used (or with intent to use) in an offence.
- Please stop swinging stuff around, it's distracting and detracts from the overall feel of the video.
- Lumping what you feel about spirituality in with knife choice and law is a bit of a stretch and the jump between the two subjects left me thinking that I'd drifted off
. It's always better to have a link which moves you from this to that in a cohesive manner ~ even if it's just 'Staring into a camp fire can be very relaxing, as can sharpening knives and tools. In the UK knives are ...'.
- You had a reasonably good split between intro (2 minutes ~ brilliant start by the way!), thoughts on spirituality (5 1/2 minutes) and knife stuff (4 1/2 minutes). But do you realise that you spent the remaining time, a quarter of the entire video, telling people to go and watch someone else? That's about equivalent to each of the subjects you were talking about :yikes: . If you want to link in to others work edit in a list of who you recommend and what their subject matter is. This will allow viewers to pause the video and make note of who you recommend viewing ~ and, because they're copying, they won't have to guess at spelling
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Please don't be put off by what I've written above, had I not been impressed by what I saw I wouldn't have gone to the effort of writing things down or posting it at all.