Very good report, thank you. It is interesting to read three reports of the same trip- what one misses, the others see.
I don't know why you are less than confident about your writing ability. As an ex-professional editor of reports, I'm very pernickity: nothing wrong with yours apart from the odd typo that we're all prone to. You must have a good editor!
Thanks for taking the trouble to share- it is much appreciated.
PS How's the Jack Wolfskin Bivvy? Clearly not the tent for a trip like this. I can see the advantages of the Go-lite, a good combination of space and weight.