Had the idea of a story while dossing in the caravan carressed by the recent storms.

[moss]

If I may;

Rain hammered like hatred agaist the old tin roof as Silan curled beneath damp sacks and unforgiving tempest. Tomorrow he would fight again. Again he would be shamed. Shivering cold he craved for his mother.
`Fell under oss` The man tomorrow said.

And so let us journey upon more fanciful times dear reader. the story of Silan's mother. And of a wild hound.

Most of all BE FREE!

Thanks. Moss.

 

[moss]

stories are free. Please look after .......silan.

 

[widu13]

Ahh, the evils of drink!

 

[TeeDee]

Ahh, the evils of drink!

Don't knock it , How do you think Harry Potter and Co came into existence?

 

[Doc]

There is saying: 'Never start a book with the weather...' - probably derived from the cliche beginning of 'It was a dark and stormy night...'

A good place to get useful feedback (well, mostly useful) on writing is http://www.youwriteon.com/

 

[Bushwhacker]

 

[Ivan...]

Paul , you sod ! you promised you would not post that pic , i was only changing my shorts ! that was taken in your lounge wasn't it ?

 

[Bushwhacker]

Paul , you sod ! you promised you would not post that pic , i was only changing my shorts ! that was taken in your lounge wasn't it ?

It's listed, amongst others, in my "dubyateeyeff is going on?" library.

 

[moss]

I do not drink alchol....

 

[rik_uk3]

Paul, you need to add more to it mate so we can try and understand what the storyline is; as it stands you've lost me.

 

[moss]

Evavlore impaviouse.......A bit of fun thats all . why the .............

 

[shaggystu]

......as it stands you've lost me.

glad it's not just me, as it stands i have no idea at all what this thread is about

stuart

 

[Ivan...]

The thing is mate , when you post something on the forum, and also ask questions , you will get a variety of answers and reactions, some good some bad , and when we dont understand some of the wording , you can open yourself up to a bit of abuse , most of it light hearted banter of course .
So i politely suggest you explain in a bit more detail , or let it go

Atb Ivan...

 

[moss]

A story for all. be free . All I ask is free spirit .

 

[mountainm]

I have to admit I nearly marked it as Spam

 

[shaggystu]

I do not drink alchol....

.....All I ask is free spirit .

to do what with?

 

[moss]

Thanks Ivan.... point taken.

 

[Bushwhacker]

If this is the thread of free expression, I'm running with it.

 

[Ivan...]

No worries Moss, when the next paragraph is ready for realease , it may become clearer to me at least , sounds like you have a great existence...

By the way is that Catweazle in your avatar ?

 

[moss]

imagination....Please feel free to add to the story. ..... anti is to loose.